Wikipedia:Peer review/Smash Williams/archive1

Smash Williams
I've listed this article for peer review because… Friday Night Lights is a growing article and grow articles usually need a GA/FA sub-article to become better. I've adde references, summary, what else?

Thanks,

Twlighter 21:25, 9 September 2007 (UTC)

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DTGardner 20:56, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
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