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Solid State Lighting
This is my first article on Wikipedia, and would appreciate any constructive criticism on my style or techniques I can use. I realize that the topic can seem a bit esoteric to some, but the technology behind it is quite fascinating.

Any constructive or technical feedback is appreciated.

Ihoudini 10:45, 10 November 2005 (UTC)
 * I like it! Very well put together. One thing - "solid-state" refers to the notion that the semiconductor properties fall within the subject of "solid-state physics" which is largely quantum-mechanical in it's approach. Another thing comes to mind, there are in fact people attempting to light their homes using this technology despite the initial cost. I think there is a noted person in England, - sorry if this is no help. You also might mention the flashlights that have been marketed, having on the order of ~13 times (guess) the battery life and many years of continuous-use total life.--RichG 12:40, 10 November 2005 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the feedback. The writing style "solid-state" and "solid state" was used interchangibly throughout the web when I did my research. If I am referring to something incorrect by using the "-", please let me know.  The coined phrase "solid state lighting" is from elsewhere, however. I added a few lines on its applications today, though I focused primarily on its future potential, as there is still extensive R&D to be done.  SSL generally refers to replacement lighting for homes, though I am open to your suggestion for its inclusion in other areas (ie, flashlights).  Perhaps you can guide me?  It'd be much appreciated. --Ihoudini 01:32, 11 November 2005 (UTC)
 * Hello again. I was specifically refering to the very beginning of your article. Trust me, solid state refers to the fact that an LED is based on Solid-state physics, not solid versus gas, although popular usage may have gained this meaning because of fluorescents. I can't really help you with sources, but if you google "LED flashlight" you'll get lots of stuff. By the way, there was a breakthrough in efficiency announced a few months ago by Universal Display Corporation. You should check them out if you haven't.--RichG 12:01, 11 November 2005 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikipedia. Some ideas to get you started with improving the article:


 * A picture of SSL is needed to illustrate the lighting style.
 * The second sentence seems to imply incandescent lighting is emitted from a vacuum or gas tube rather than a solid filament but this is incorrect.
 * History needs to be expanded - you might like to include a few more details on the history of the LED.
 * Formatting needs to be reconsider - for example, it would be best to remove the double line-breaks.

You might also like to mention that although SSL is rarely used as a complete lighting solution it is currently being used for decorative lighting, flashlights and traffic lights. 

Good luck with your work. Cedars 02:13, 12 November 2005 (UTC)