Wikipedia:Peer review/Sonic Adventure 2/archive1

Sonic Adventure 2
This peer review discussion has been closed. Considering FACing this sometime later this year. All comments appreciated; thanks! Tezero (talk) 18:56, 9 February 2015 (UTC)

Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 18:21, 13 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Comments by David Fuchs

I'll be back in a day or two. --ProtoDrake (talk) 19:26, 14 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Comments by ProtoDrake

Here we go. Those are the ones that stood out. I could come back for more. --ProtoDrake (talk) 14:30, 15 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Ref 28 needs its url updating. The GameSpot and IGN reviews also need their urls updating to the current ones. I would also archive the online references as several sites have been closing or changing recently. I would also find alternatives to the VGMDb references. They are inadmissible at FAC.
 * "A Nintendo GameCube port of Sonic Adventure 2, entitled Sonic Adventure 2 Battle (ソニックアドベンチャー2 バトル Sonikku Adobenchā Tsū Batoru?), was released..." - "Entitled" seems a little odd in the context of this sentence. "Titled" might be better.
 * "Every level includes five missions; only the first is required to continue on during the campaign, but other missions include completing a harder version of a level and collecting 100 rings. The player earns emblems by completing missions, as well as other tasks, many of them related to Chao raising. Collecting all emblems unlocks a 3D version of the Green Hill Zone level from the original Sonic the Hedgehog.[11]" - You should really find a reference for some of this that isn't a primary reference.

I would expand "Reception" with more than five reviews in the table and discuss the level design, which shouldn't be hard considering the emphasis some of the sources (e.g., IGN) place on it. Moreover, the implication that all of the play styles were equally acclaimed seems false. For example, the Game Informer review I used at Dreamcast argues the slower characters contribute to a disjointed, unfocused experience (I'll send you the text via email).TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 04:40, 16 February 2015 (UTC) I will do the above as soon as I have access to a computer. (please revert if this is in the wrong place) --George (Talk &middot; Contribs &middot; CentralAuth &middot; Log) 09:36, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Comments by TheTimesAreAChanging
 * Comments by George.Edward.C