Wikipedia:Peer review/Space manufacturing/archive1

Space manufacturing
This page is an attempted overview of space manufacturing, at least as it is conceived at the current time (prior to actually starting up some space-based factories). I didn't have a whole lot of success trying to fill out the references section with books &mdash; the article's mainly based on material on the web and some procedings I had. I also didn't include some of the more specific material-processing techniques (such as acid leeching) that seemed too detail-oriented. What else do you think needs to be added? Thank you. &mdash; RJH 19:42, 29 Apr 2005 (UTC)
 * I'd recommend linking the stuff like acid leeching at least as a 'see also'. If you used external links as references, move them to references and add 'last accessed on...'. Try to rewrite 'Environment' to eliminate bullet points (common complain in FAC). I'd like to see 'History' section expanded, short paras merged and a section of future prospects (trends, space elevator possibility, etc.) added near the end. Looks good, I expect to see it in FAC soon after those improvements. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 16:10, 6 May 2005 (UTC)