Wikipedia:Peer review/Spanish toothcarp/archive1

Spanish toothcarp
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because this article is a Good Article on Spanish Wikipedia and I'd like it to be considered the same here.

Certain sections of the article confused me, especially scientific details (like "Divergence between populations"), so it needs revision by someone more experienced than me.

This was a large translation and I may have made a few mistakes. If you speak Spanish please look at the original as well :)

Also, I'm having trouble finding sources in English.

Thanks, XRDoDRX (talk) 13:36, 20 September 2010 (UTC)


 * Comments by Jappalang


 * Dablinks (toolbox on the right side of this peer review page) shows 6 disambiguation links; please fix them.


 * Too many sections of information are uncited to their sources. Per the policy Verifiability, all information (especially contentious ones) must be cited to reliable sources.


 * What makes http://www.juntadeandalucia.es/averroes/nuevaandalucia/water/the%20fartet.htm a reliable source per Wikipedia policy? Please refer to Wikipedia Signpost/2008-06-26/Dispatches and Wikipedia Signpost/2008-07-28/Dispatches on how sources are generally judged at FACs.


 * What base map was File:Mapaespana-fartet.jpg derived from? What source of information was the range of the species derived from?  Please read commons:Commons:Image casebook, WP:IUP, WP:CITE


 * Lists are discouraged, please convert Conservation status to prose.

The lack of citations would be the biggest hurdle to attaining higher levels of assessment. Jappalang (talk) 02:01, 25 September 2010 (UTC)