Wikipedia:Peer review/Squirtle/archive1

Squirtle
Suritle currently is the only original starter Pokémon to not be a good article or featured article. Hence, I would like to get comments here to see how I can improve it to this status and probably beyond (hopefully "A-class" status on the article assessment criteria). My goal isn't FA, since I know the heartache that such debates cause (if anyone's interested, the next one I'm going to nominate for FA is either Pokémon Red and Blue, Pikachu or Pokémon - this should remove all of the responses that the topic isn't noteworthy). Thank you in advance! Regards, --Cel es tianpower háblame 08:08, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
 * A bit of jargon, such as water-typed pokemon. Also, has parts in which it seems to be a bit of a game manual - such as "As a Water-type Pokémon, Squirtle has an advantage over the Pokémon of the first Gym Leader (Brock, who specializes in the Rock type), but has a stalemate type-wise with Misty’s Pokémon, and is vulnerable to the Electric and Grass assaults of Lt. Surge and Erika (Pokémon)." --Midnighttonight 08:14, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Image for the anime, reference the Pokédex, work on the manga, it's in the Chamo-Chamo manga also. Work more on the videogames, and do something about the huge lead. On another note, are we not allowed to nominate other articles for FAC? H ig hway Rainbow Sneakers 08:21, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
 * There's no we about it. I'm not going to nominate any other creature articles (except Pikachu). Feel free to do so yourself. --Cel es tianpower háblame 08:29, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Apologies. Could we maybe an image of it in the manga? H ig hway Rainbow Sneakers 12:55, 13 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Image:Squirtle tcg.jpg and Image:Charmander pokemon blue.PNG need fair use rationales. (see WP:FUC). AndyZ t 15:37, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Will do, I was going to anyway. Cheers, H ig hway Rainbow Sneakers 15:44, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Done. Cheers, H ig hway Rainbow Sneakers 15:49, 13 May 2006 (UTC)