Wikipedia:Peer review/Stairway to Heaven/archive1

Stairway to Heaven
I would like to know what you guys think of this article. I know it is not ready to be featured by this is my first time trying to get an article featured so I don't know what needs to be fixed. Any comments would help. Dan M 00:23, 30 November 2005 (UTC)


 * Opening sentence should be more professional, than simply "a famous song", and include a year, writer, etc Sherurcij 03:46, 30 November 2005 (UTC)


 * The lead definitely needs to be expanded. D e nni &#9775;  04:05, 30 November 2005 (UTC)


 * I'm increasing the lead by moving up the first few lines from the history section. However, I do not know where to put this:
 * It did, however, appear as a promotional disc in the United States, on an Australian acoustic EP, and in the 1990s as a 20th anniversary promo issue.
 * It doesn't fit with either the lead or the History section now. I'm leaving it in the lead, but it can't stay.
 * From the article: This form would influence many other rock artists, notably Queen, who would use a similar structure for their opus "Bohemian Rhapsody". Needs a citation showing Queen was definitely influenced by Stairway.
 * Needs an iconic picture of Page playing the two necked guitar. Article is lacking without it.
 * "Our turntables only play in one direction&mdash;forwards" Great Quote, would love a citation.

My name is No Parking and I approved this message. 14:48, 30 November 2005 (UTC)