Wikipedia:Peer review/Star Trek/archive1

Star Trek
This article used to be part of the brilliant prose articles I believe, but has since been removed from the FA list. With this Peer Rreview, I am looking for what needs to be done to get this up to a true Featured Article. Any suggestions or comments would be nice, and specifics would be even more excellent. If for each "flaw" in the article, you can give a specific example or two (or three) that demonstrates that, that would be awesome. Thanks, Newnam(talk) 01:14, 6 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Andy t 00:37, 8 July 2006 (UTC)