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Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace

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This is the second peer review request for this article. The first one can be found here: Wikipedia:Peer review/Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace/archive1. This article was removed from FA status due to issues with citing IMDb as a source, which User:Movieguy999 submitted in its FAR, which can be found at Wikipedia:Featured article review/Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace. I am resubmitting it for peer review, because I believe I want to get this to FA status, like User:The Filmaker did before this article got demoted. Any comments on improving it to meet FAC standards would be appreciated. Thanks,  Greg  Jones   II  03:16, 16 January 2008 (UTC)


 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 03:25, 18 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Comment I feel like the remaining IMDb references are also replaceable. The Studio Briefing blurbs are basically second-hand reportings of reliable sources such as the Associated Press or the LA Times, etc. It's always best to use the original articles instead of relying on second-hand information. The awards IMDb sources can also be easily replaced. Budding Journalist 03:28, 18 January 2008 (UTC)


 * The article (like the other SW movie articles) is included in Category:Epic films which in turn links to Epic film for more information. Since Epic film is a mainspace article (and a short and weakly referenced one at that) it provides no precise, reliable criteria as to which films are to be considered epic films. Thus, the inclusion of each film article into this category requires sources to verify and explain why this film can be considered an epic film. Until then, the movie should not be in the category as it would be OR to simply assert that it is an epic film. User:Dorftrottel 04:37, January 19, 2008