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Star Wars Episode VI: Return of the Jedi

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This is the second peer review request for this article. The first one can be found at Wikipedia:Peer review/Star Wars Episode VI: Return of the Jedi/archive1. We have tried to get this to FA status, but both attempts at that failed. I am resubmitting it for peer review, because I want to make this FA along with the recently demoted Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace and I believe that it is almost FA quality. Any comments on improving them shall be very much appreciated. Thanks,  Greg  Jones   II  00:39, 16 January 2008 (UTC)


 * I haven't taken a big, section-by-section look at the article, but it looks like the lead could use some expansion to mention marketing and later releases. I don't think it's as comprehensive as a lead section should be.  bibliomaniac 1  5  00:50, 16 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Yes, I agree with that. :) Anything else?  Greg  Jones   II  03:19, 16 January 2008 (UTC)


 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 03:29, 18 January 2008 (UTC)