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Starrcade (1983)

 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for May 2008.
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for May 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to receive feedback on the quality of the article so further improvements could be made and possibilities on promoting the article to a higher class could be considered. Thanks, 13 of Diamonds (talk) 09:49, 29 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments from Nikki I'm really glad you are working on the important NWA pay-per-views, and this article looks pretty good. I've gone through and fixed some comma problems. In most cases, only add a comma between two clauses if they can stand independently of one another. There are a few more comments I want to make, but I don't have a lot of time right now. I'll be back with them later tonight. Nikki 311  22:54, 1 June 2008 (UTC)

Here's some more specific things: Other than those small issues, it looks really good. Nikki 311  23:28, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
 * The lead needs to mention something from the aftermath.
 * The lead is supposed to summarize the information in the article, not provide new information...so, I think the information about the development of the event needs to be explained elsewhere in the article (maybe the background?) and briefly mentioned in the lead.