Wikipedia:Peer review/State University of New York at Binghamton/archive1

State University of New York at Binghamton
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to continue to work to eventually bring it up to Good Article status. I've done a great deal of work over the past few days to bring it more into line with the WikiProject: Universities standards.

Thanks, Wsanders (talk) 08:18, 27 March 2008 (UTC)

Several WP:MOS issues need sorting out, but specifics... A lot to do for GA. Feel free to shout if you need help with any of the above. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:43, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Comments from
 * Section headings must comply with WP:HEAD.
 * Citations should be placed in accordance with WP:CITE.
 * Explain SUNY before using it as an abbreviation.
 * If image captions are fragments, they don't take a full stop.
 * You need considerably more references, you have many [citation needed]'s already and a whole section tagged as needing references.
 * When making references, use the Cite web template, not just raw urls.
 * Image sizing should comply with WP:MOS.
 * Value ranking has no references at all.
 * What's a SAT score? Remember, this needs to be understood by non-American, non-academic readers.
 * What makes a notable alumnus "notable"? This section will be WP:POV.

I would look for a model article or two to follow - Ohio Wesleyan University or Michigan State University come to mind, but there are others. Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 23:48, 3 April 2008 (UTC)