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Steve Lukather
I've been working on this article for quite a while with the goal of making FA status. I've sort of stalled out and I'd like to get some suggestions for pushing it over the hill. I have researched the subject exhaustively using the resources I have (scholarly online search for journals, magazine articles, etc. and the subject's online biography) and can't find any more easily. I'd love feedback on the prose and on what sections specifically need expansion (or shrinkage?)

Thanks, Bloodzombie 22:07, 26 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 16:22, 28 October 2007 (UTC)