Wikipedia:Peer review/Summer of '42/archive1

Summer of '42
Looking to get this oft neglected, quasi-cult film on the front page of Wiki. If anyone could offer any assistance in getting this article in tip-top shape for a Featured Article vote, I'd really appreciate it.Mistergrind 01:39, 8 June 2006 (UTC)

Some thoughts: Cheers. Cvene64 16:57, 10 June 2006 (UTC)
 * The lead is not general enough, there is too much music/box office info in here. Flesh it out into the article.
 * Use the theatrical poster if its not the same as the DVD cover.
 * Where is the plot summary? Is it supposed to be part of the factual basis section?
 * Ditch or merge the trivia.
 * All film titles in the text should be in italics.
 * Cast list is not good. See V for Vendetta (film) and other FAs for ideas to write about a cast. Should not be at the bottom either.
 * Awards section within cast is random. Try not to have lists, anywhere. Maybe merge this into reception, talk about the notable wins.
 * A screenshot would be useful.
 * Just checkout other FAs closey, compare it to the article to see how it can be improved.