Wikipedia:Peer review/Supreme Commander/archive1

Supreme Commander
General suggestions for improvement are needed on the following:
 * Lead section.
 * Gameplay section.
 * Prose. I have tried to improve the general style, but some things are never caught by the writer. Specific suggestions are appreciated.
 * Anything else!

Very specific requests for comment:
 * Is the style of citing Rorie (2007) currently employed(see references) the correct one?
 * I have attempted to keep the infobox as short as possible, because it extended far into the gameplay section. The system requirements were moved to the Development section because of this effort, and summarized in the infobox.
 * Is the otheruses template needed?

Known issues:
 * An actual in-game, non-promo, screenshot is needed. I am trying to obtain one.
 * The Factions in Supreme Commander article is an awful in-universe game guide article. On hold with the motto "first things first".
 * The cquotes in the Reception section have attracted some controversy, mainly because it is not a style often employed in Wikipedia. (Though very common in newspapers and other sources) Unless a fitting image can be found, I would like to keep them in.

--User:Krator (t c) 11:47, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

Huh? --User:Krator (t c) 14:15, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I apologize for the oversight on my part. &mdash; Bluerで す. 14:21, 28 May 2007 (UTC)

They should be a section about modding and the software such has map editor and so on. They are some things which cant not be added in wikipedia but can be added in wikia which is available on external links. Right now only things that should be added is modding information. --SkyWalker 09:20, 30 May 2007 (UTC)