Wikipedia:Peer review/Swedish allotment system/archive1

Swedish allotment system
Written today by me, interresting subject and I'd love to see it as an FA. Primarily looking for people to fix possible spelling and grammar errors, but also interrested in comments about how well one not familiar with the subject understands the text. Any other comments is of course also welcome! -- Elisson &bull; Talk 18:21, 14 August 2005 (UTC)
 * It looks good to me. Just a few minor tweaks needed here and there. Pretty comprehensive. &mdash; RJH 20:14, 18 August 2005 (UTC)
 * Thanks! User:Bishonen did a good job copyediting the article a few days ago, but I've added new info since then so some more copyediting may be needed. I rejoined a paragraph you splitted, as it felt wrong to split it in the middle of a "story", hope you don't mind. -- Elisson &bull; Talk 21:17, 18 August 2005 (UTC)