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Switzerland in the Eurovision Song Contest 2008
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I believe that I have significantly improved this article to a good standard (not FA, but still pretty good) and I'd like to know where I can improve this article, what's good and what's bad in the article, and also what grade it is.

Thanks, Sims2aholic8 (Michael) (talk) 22:17, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for October 2008.

Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. I will admit that I know very little about Eurovision. Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 01:43, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Is there a reason why there is not an image in the upper right corner (presumably above the infobox)? Is there any way to add an image to the infobox?
 * The lead should be expanded per WP:LEAD. My rule of thumb is to include every header in the lead in some way.
 * This needs a ref: Promoting his song, Meneguzzi later went on a Eurovision TV special on Maltese television in April 2008. My rule of thumb is that every quote, every statistic, every extraordinary claim and every paragraph needs a ref.
 * There are some short (one or two sentence) paragraphs which should be combined with others or perhaps expanded to improve the flow of the article.
 * I think it might help to provide more context to the reader - see WP:PCR. For example, a sentence or two on the Eurovision contest would help, or explaining in more detail the history of how the I Swiss pick their song and performer.
 * I think it could be made clearer that the singer is an Italian speaking Swiss citizen - I was confused at first and thought he was an Italian citizen.