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Tacoma Streetcar Disaster
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Thanks, Belchfire (talk) 21:14, 19 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Quick comments
 * Suggest spelling out "WA" for the benefit of non-Americans
 * Don't wikilink dates
 * What timezone?
 * In general, the article is readable but a bit short - is any further information available?
 * How many were injured? How many were on board before the accident?
 * Try using the convert template for imperial measurements Nikkimaria (talk) 19:50, 21 July 2012 (UTC)