Wikipedia:Peer review/Taiko/archive1

Taiko
This peer review discussion has been closed. I'm seeking to bring this article to Featured Article status. I believe it is on its way there, but need some additional feedback on the writing style, whether it is comprehensive, the current referencing system, and the "additional sources" section on whether it is appropriate to keep it (it had been there since I started working on the article). Thanks, I, JethroBT  drop me a line 02:15, 4 August 2014 (UTC)