Wikipedia:Peer review/Tamaraw/archive1

Tamaraw
Hi I just followed the to-do list given to me by a fellow Pinoy Wikipedian. We managed to fix all but one citation (we didn't go through the DENR people though) and I think the spelling is ok.

These is what the article needs:

Comments: Is it GA worthy?

Contributions: Images, we only managed to get two free images

-- Lenticel ( talk ) 02:14, 1 August 2007 (UTC)

Automated Peer Review
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question. *Consider adding more links to the article; per Manual of Style (links) and Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?] I think all of these were addressed -- Lenticel ( talk ) 10:12, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.[?]
 * If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]

*Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 0 centimeters, use 0 centimeters, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 0&amp;nbsp;centimeters.[?]

Fixed by Shrumster-- Lenticel ( talk ) 09:58, 3 August 2007 (UTC)

*Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.[?] Specifically, an example is 13.5 cm.

did not find any abbreviated units -- Lenticel ( talk ) 09:58, 3 August 2007 (UTC)

*Per Wikipedia:Context and Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006.[?]

adressed -- Lenticel ( talk ) 09:58, 3 August 2007 (UTC)

*There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. *Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behavior (A) (British: behaviour), behaviour (B) (American: behavior), meter (A) (British: metre), defense (A) (British: defence), ization (A) (British: isation), analyse (B) (American: analyze),  gray (A) (British:  grey).
 * it has been
 * might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).[?]

Made all words set to American spelling -- Lenticel ( talk ) 09:58, 3 August 2007 (UTC)

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 12:04, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]


 * Request for comment. Would the article as it is, pass FAC without having that many images? Shrumster 20:33, 9 August 2007 (UTC)