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Ted Heaton


I started this article on a former British swimmer/diver not long ago and have expanded it to the point that I feel it's close to being taken to GA. I'd like a peer review beforehand to iron out any obvious errors or issues and think it would benefit to have another set of eyes read over it. Thanks, Bungle (talk • contribs) 21:22, 16 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720
Since this is a GAN, I am going to close this PR. However, here are some comments to help while you wait for a GAN:


 * Anything to add to Early life? Maybe merge with 19th century?
 * Not sure the level 3 heading in 20th century is necessary.

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 19:53, 2 October 2022 (UTC)


 * @Z1720: Thanks. I started the PR in the hope someone could pick up any obvious defects but ultimately it didn't look like it was going anywhere, so I did bite the GAN bullet (I think it's in a fairly good state though). Appreciate you have given it a quick look over, none the less. Bungle (talk • contribs) 20:42, 2 October 2022 (UTC)