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Terms of Endearment (The X-Files)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've never done a Featured Article before and wanted the opinions of more experienced editors to scrutinize the article a bit more before nominating it. It's a pretty straight-forward article, apart of a long series of FA articles related to the X-Files.

Thanks, Bruce Campbell (talk) 01:43, 12 September 2012 (UTC)

TRLIJC19 ( talk  •  contribs ) 00:17, 21 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK.
 * It would probably be better to leave it as "Fox Broadcasting Company", the official title, rather than piping the link.
 * "The episode received received mixed to positive reviews from critics, with the performance given by guest actor Bruce Campbell attracting most of the positive reception." -- Why is 'received' typed twice?
 * ""Terms of Endearment" was the first episode written by The X-Files executive story editor David Amann, a staff member who later became a regular contributor to the series." -- "[...] written by The X-Files executive [...]" should be "[...] written by The X-Files' executive [...]".
 * "Amann was inspired to a write a story that was "Rosemary's Baby in reverse"." -- Why the 'a' after 'to' and before 'write'?
 * The two pieces of quoted material in P3 of the lead need citations directly after them.

I have to go out right now, so I'll finish off the rest of the article later today. TRLIJC19 ( talk  •  contribs ) 16:55, 23 September 2012 (UTC)