Wikipedia:Peer review/The Apprentice (UK)/archive1

The Apprentice (UK)
Me and some fellow editors are trying to get the article to FA status. Please can you inform us about any changes you think needed to be made and which sections are the poorest. We have previously been informed that the article suffers from poor sentencing/wording. If you agree, please copy/paste the related sentences here and make any corrections you see fit. Thanks, Dalejenkins 18:13, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Comments on article talk page EyeSereneTALK 20:42, 10 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 23:29, 10 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Why don't you nominate it for GAC before you try for FA again? I can see two citation needed tags. And the references need to be in the citeweb format, loads of them have no accessdates. Gran2 06:57, 13 May 2007 (UTC)