Wikipedia:Peer review/The Bus Uncle/archive2

Peer review/The Bus Uncle/archive1

The Bus Uncle
A previous version of the discussion has been archived here. I've improved the formatting of the article, and provided many sources to most statements in the article. I also improved the grammar, and moved the transcript to a sister article. Please suggest more ways to improve the article to Featured Status. Thanks.--Kylohk 10:40, 17 April 2007 (UTC)