Wikipedia:Peer review/The Children's Machine/archive1

The Children's Machine
This article has been classified as a good article already. It seems comprehensive, and it would be appreciated if you commented on how to work it up to a featured article. --Gray Porpoise 22:08, 19 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Change the Embedded Citations, and the references to the proper citation template]. Most of them are missing information about the author and some do not have proper format.  There are several quotes of a wiki which have to be moved to a  linking to the revision referred to. The exteral links, notes, and references should all be merged, there is no reason to have to mention an article 3 times.  The overseers of the project should mentioned in the first sentence. [[User:Jon513|Jon513 22:52, 19 August 2006 (UTC)