Wikipedia:Peer review/The Chinese Restaurant/archive1

The Chinese Restaurant
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I think it has potential for FA. It has just passed its GA review, and I would like to hear some feedback.

Thanks, -- Music 26/  11  18:56, 22 October 2009 (UTC)

Comments from Mm40 (talk) 12:49, 24 October 2009 (UTC)
 * At FAC, you'll need ALT text for the image.
 * Done.
 * I think the comma in the second sentence can be removed.
 * You're going to have to be a little more specific; what comma?
 * In "Plot" link egg roll. Also, per that article's name, all instances of "egg-roll" should become "egg roll", without the hyphen.
 * Done.
 * Is the link to Genghis required?
 * Nah, I figured the name of the restaurant wasn't that important, also I found another ref that did not back up the name but it did back up the inspiration, so I removed it.
 * Is there a typo in the Richards quote: "I knew that was a very important episode"? Seems to be missing an "it".
 * He's referring to the episode with "that".
 * "…starting with the season two premiere "The Ex-Girlfriend"…" is redundant and can be taken out. You say all season two episodes, so of course it would start with the premiere.
 * Done.
 * "previous and later" can be made "other".
 * Done.
 * It's unclear what "shortest audience record ever" means. Least amount of time, least people attending the filming, etc.
 * Clearified.
 * "Jigsaw puzzle" should be lowercase.
 * Done.
 * "Married... With Children", per the article's name, should have a lowercase "with".
 * Done.
 * I think a comma belongs after "Married... With Children". Not sure, though.
 * Done.
 * The article uses both "guest-starred" and "guest starred"; be consistent.
 * Changed all to guest-starred.
 * Really picky here, but per WP:DASH, "-A" should be &minus;A, displaying "&minus;A".
 * Really picky indeed. Changed.
 * Is that a typo under "External links"? it says "The Baby Shower" but links to the correct page.
 * Copied template off another page, changed to correct episode page.
 * As far as I can tell, this is very close to featured status. I would support this. Mm40 (talk) 12:49, 24 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I might take you up on that, thanks for the review.-- Music 26/  11  12:56, 26 October 2009 (UTC)