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The Concrete Herald
Hi everyone! I ask to peer review this because it ended up to be my first in-depth article. (I planned another topic for this role, but attempts to delete this article prompted me to save it by going deep.) I like to go deep into topics, so your kind feedback should be helpful for me to go forward.

Thanks, 凰兰时罗 (talk) 21:12, 3 November 2016 (UTC)


 * Impressive work in expanding the article after it was almost deleted. There are some issues I noted if you want to make the article become a GA or FA.

That's all I found. Great work. If you fix some of this issues I believe it could become a good article which is a lot for its almost deletion. Also if you have free time, I also made a peer review here. Could you give it a look? Thanks.Tintor2 (talk) 15:27, 4 November 2016 (UTC)
 * First of all, the lead. Per WP: Lead, it should be at least 2 paragraphs long and no use citations since it will be covered in the body.
 * Avoid unsourced statements like "The newspaper maintains dedicated sections to local news from Darrington, Clear Lake, Hamilton, Lyman, Marblemount, Newhalem, Rockport, and Sedro-Woolley."
 * The image in distribution really clashes with the prose. I would recommend merging the two distrubution sections and leave the image below them.