Wikipedia:Peer review/The Dark Fields/archive1

The Dark Fields
I've listed this article for peer review because I have expanded the content significantly and would like to hear the community's appraisal of my work.

Thanks, Eddie morra brian (talk) 18:10, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

Comments by Tintor2 (talk) 16:07, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Hello Eddie. The article looks good but there are somethings bothering me.

Other than that, I also made a peer review in Peer review/Allen Walker/archive1 and I would appreciate feedback.
 * 1) Try expanding the lead to mention other stuff such as the premise and other stuff. Normally, well-written articles have two paragraphs in the lead.
 * 2) Could you make a reception section? Sales would be good.
 * 3) The Film adaptation section feels like WP:Original research. Maybe you could trim it and leave it like a legacy section alongside tv spin off.
 * 4) One last thing, the making of the novel (inspirations, author's comments) could be helpful.
 * More sources are needed. Try:
 * THE DARK FIELDS. By: Zaleski, Jeff. Publishers Weekly. 11/19/2001, Vol. 248 Issue 47, p48
 * Time Is 'Limitless.' By: GLYNN, ALAN. Publishers Weekly. 5/16/2011, Vol. 228 Issue 20, p76
 * No Glamour Backstage, No-Frills Trading Room. New York Times. 1/13/2002, Vol. 151 Issue 51997, Section 14 p5
 * The Dark Fields (Book). By: Kaufman, King. New York Times Book Review. 3/3/2002, p16. --maclean (talk) 04:37, 11 July 2016 (UTC)