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The Downward Spiral
This peer review discussion has been closed. Here's a Peer Review (PR) of this article. It's called "The Downward Spiral", and it's about a Nine Inch Nails album. I expanded and improved it starting in Spring 2011, and reworked the article, succeeded by a Good Article Nomination (GAN) by me. User:IHelpWhenICan reviewed it in a mixed critical consensus, and the first Good Article Review (GAR) was a failed scab to bring it up to Good Article (GA) status.

Most recently, I have listed "The Downward Spiral" for peer review, so please... Don't give any fuck about it. Just talk about the article and suggest to me any improvements to mend the article. I appreciate my move, just because it's a easy job. By the way, the GA review lasted for a few weeks, and was declared an epic failure.

According to the paragraph above this one, make any comments about it and give me suggestions to improve it. All right? Okay. Just make comments and suggest random improvements to me.  'I  `'/ I>    &lt; pr o n 0 un¢ed "On£-ThouSand-&gt;     02:57, 26 June 2011 (UTC)'e7enT¥" &gt;   '  02:57, 26 June 2011 (UTC)


 * I am removing this PR request from the backlog and closing it as the nominator has been indefintely blocked for disruptive editing. Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 18:10, 6 July 2011 (UTC)