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The Five Heartbeats

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This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because the quality of this article has recently significantly improved and the article was previously assessed as stub class. The article appears to meet the criteria for a B article, however I would appreciate a second opinion.

Thanks, UniversalBread (talk) 20:19, 17 August 2008 (UTC) Done Done Done Done Done Done Done Done UniversalBread (talk) 21:38, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
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