Wikipedia:Peer review/The Game (rapper)/archive1

The Game (rapper)
I have done extensive work on this article and am trying to get it to Good Article status. Comments on all aspects would be appericated. --Ted87 20:27, 28 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Looking good, I hope that verify clean-up tag is for an older version. I would recommend merging and/or deleting the trivia section. - Tutmosis  21:15, 28 November 2006 (UTC)
 * LILVOKA doesn't seem to like the extensive biography section (despite that this is a article about a person), that's why those tags are up there. He also questions the validity of the sources used in the section. Most specifically Hurricanegames.us, even though the links posted are to an interview done by Sister2Sister magazine. The trivia section is just used as a dumping ground for any info that doesn't seem to fit in another section of the article, so it definatly could/should be shortend. Thanks for the comments. --Ted87 21:23, 28 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 22:59, 29 November 2006 (UTC)


 * OK, let's see. I like the article as a whole, but the "verify" tags keep annoying me. And talking about the Trivia section, it needs to be split to Awards, TV, Games appearances and maybe some personal "stuff", but that last one could go, if it does better to the page. Although a Trivia section is not so bad to have within the article, but these infos are so unnecessary there.  Lajbi  Holla @ me  11:16, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
 * So the consensus seems to be the trivia secton needs to be deleted/reworked. Thanks for the input. Keep it coming people. --Ted87 18:44, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
 * Yeah that's correct - trivia sections always prevent any article improving. Anything noteworthy in this trivia section should be integrated into the article, but if it isn't noteworthy it should be eradicated. LuciferMorgan 03:16, 2 December 2006 (UTC)


 * I removed the trivia section and merged any necessary info. --Ted87 22:39, 5 December 2006 (UTC)