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The Monster Bed
I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it has the potential to be a featured article. I have already nominated it as a good article. I really want to know what kind of suggestions I need to make it better.

Thanks,

– Sidious1701(talk &bull; email &bull; todo) 23:20, 13 January 2008 (UTC)


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