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The Moon and the Sandals

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 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for April 2009.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I want to see how this article can be improved to GA-class or later, FA-class.

Thanks, Extremepro (talk) 00:41, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments from Tintor2 (talk) 14:19, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
 * The lead should be longer per WP: Lead. Try adding a short overview of reception.
 * For only 2 volumes the plot sections seems to be very long.
 * If if you know information about the creation of the manga it would be good to add it. Since the publication section is a bit short merge it with the section about creation once it is created. I guess it could be named Development and publication.


 * Agreed on the plot (I wrote it to replace the incorrect one there, but left a note on the talk page that it needs paring down). I will recheck the volumes tonight to see if there is any production information, but I'm pretty sure there wasn't. -- Collectonian  (talk · contribs) 15:45, 6 April 2009 (UTC)