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The One with All the Thanksgivings
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I plan to take this to WP:FAC in the near future. Much of its work has been done in the last month or so and having passed WP:GAC, I would like to know what more can be added, if applicable. Thanks, Lemonade51 (talk) 23:04, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 17:26, 18 May 2012 (UTC)
 * "Flashbacks"[2])" think I'd move that ref outside the ).
 * To avoid having back-to-back links, suggest you reword "eighth episode of Friends' fifth season" to "eighth episode of the fifth season of Friends"
 * Not convinced you need to link "United States".
 * " got a turkey stuck on his head" not keen on that phrasing.
 * A minor point, all stories are past tense until " Ross brings Chandler home for ..." any reason?
 * "It is the fifth Thanksgiving special in the Friends series." ref?
 * "Doing a flashback meant the ..." again, "doing" is really inelegant writing as far as I'm concerned. Can we rephrase?
 * "The comic tone of "The One with All the Thanksgivings" was bigger than usual," do "tones" become "bigger"?
 * Psycho should be Psycho.
 * Not sure there's a real necessity for small text in the refs.
 * Is Amazon.com the best ref we can find?