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The Puppy Episode

 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for November 2008.
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for November 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because although it's brand-new I think it comes fairly close to GA standards. I'd like another set of eyes on it before making the nomination.

Thanks, Otto4711 (talk) 07:36, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Not going to do a full review here since this isn't my field of expertise, but you might want to rephrase "ABC situation comedy Ellen" so we don't have three separate blue linked terms in a row. We don't want seas of blue. Ten Pound Hammer  and his otters • (Broken clamshells • Otter chirps • HELP) 19:46, 19 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments I don't have very much to say about the article, there were a few errors, but these were so minor that I've already fixed them myself. A few things left though:


 * Reference 17 (TV guide) needs to link to the TV Guide article in question, not to the TV Guide Ellen news page because that still changes every once in a while.
 * The tv show infobox has a parameter for guest stars, so you can merge the guest star section into the infobox.
 * According to this, reference 4 is dead.

Otherwise the page looks nice, problably GA worthy (maybe even FA?). Good luck with the eventual GAc.-- Music 26/  11  13:10, 23 November 2008 (UTC)