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The Red Pyramid
I've listed this article for peer review because it is only listed as Start class. I would like to know how I could improve it. --Boothsift (talk) 00:12, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Thanks, Boothsift (talk) 00:12, 24 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Presumably the ages of hte pyramids wold help in para 2 of the History section. Needs refs and embellishing. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:25, 10 December 2018 (UTC)