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The Return of Doctor Mysterio


I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get this to GA as it would be my first GA and I want to eventually try and get some Legends of Tomorrow episodes to GA. I was originally going to do this with Doctor Who (series 13) but I feel this one is a better option for a peer review as I already have notes on that one from a past GA review (which failed). I previously opened a peer review for Beebo the God of War but I was told that it wasnt good enough for one, so apologies if this doesnt meet the criteria either, but I feel it does.

Thanks, Questions? four OLIfanofmrtennant (she/her) 14:44, 26 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720
Comments after a quick skim:


 * The "Continuity" and "Outside references" sections are too much fancruft and should probably be removed from the article.
 * There are many short sections, which should be expanded upon or merged with others.
 * The "Critical reception" relies too heavily on quotes. Read WP:RECEPTION for tips on how to improve upon reception sections.
 * Take a look at Doomsday (Doctor Who) for ideas on what could be added to this article.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:38, 8 October 2023 (UTC)