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The Thin Red Line (1998 film)
Any helpful comments and/or suggestions would be greatly appreciated as I woud like to improve this article to a GA level. J.D. 20:49, 25 February 2007 (UTC)

Review by bcasterline
Great movie. A few suggestions for the article: Good luck. -- bcasterline • talk
 * The lead should summarize more of the article per WP:LEAD. The cast might deserve it's own section; in any case, the list in the intro probably doesn't belong.
 * Shorten "Synopsis" if possible, leaving out the smaller details. Also, I would avoid expressions like "massive invasion", "instantly slaughtered", etc. -- I don't think they really belong in an encyclopedia.
 * Add references for the "Style and themes" per WP:V/WP:OR.
 * Expand/cleanup "Adaptations". At the moment it reads like a list, which is kind of sloppy.
 * Expand "Criticisms" and "Responses" -- lots of information on critical acclaim/public response is usually valuable.
 * Remove the last "popular culture" section. The advice to avoid trivia sections in articles almost always applies.


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 22:38, 26 February 2007 (UTC)