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The Two Babylons
Can I get some help verifying what I wrote? I also need some help expanding it and summarising the relevant points (help cutting down the text and summarising more would be helpful also!) The full text is online at. - Ta bu shi da yu 10:51, 1 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * This was removed yesterday. Please give it another day on peer review (in other words make it one month + one day). - Ta bu shi da yu 23:22, 1 Feb 2005 (UTC)