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The Who Tour 1969
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I want to know if this article is ready to be a Good Article. Thanks, Chrisnait (talk) 14:50, 18 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Yeah this looks fun. MAXIMUM R+B! But, err, where is the actual article? ——  SN  54129  19:54, 23 January 2020 (UTC)
 * The article was redirected to List of The Who tours and performances by Ritchie333 a few days after this request was made. I left a message on his talk page a few minutes ago, but I have yet to get a response. Chrisnait (talk) 19:58, 23 January 2020 (UTC)
 * It's also mostly a duplicate of Tommy (The Who album). Since the tour for Tommy spanned well over a year, splitting it into 1969 / 70 doesn't make sense. I'm not sure what you'd call it (The Who Tommy Tour sounds like a mouthful), but it should cover the Hanwell Community Centre rehearsals in April 1969 through to the "Last Tommy Ever" Roundhouse gig on 20 December 1970. That'd work. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  20:14, 23 January 2020 (UTC)
 * How does this sound: The Who Tour 1969 and The Who Tour 1970 articles could be merged into the Tommy Tour article. I'm open to cover the tour from its rehearsals to its end in this larger article. Additionally, finding additional book sources won't be that difficult, since I own some books about the Who at home. Chrisnait (talk) 20:39, 23 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Okay, I've merged the two together into a standalone article; I'll have a look through and check there are no discrepancies. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  21:04, 23 January 2020 (UTC)
 * I have finished expanding the Tommy Tour article, but since The Who Tour 1969 is a redirect, how will this peer review work now? Chrisnait (talk) 00:43, 24 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Since The Who Tour 1969 now redirects to Tommy Tour, I guess this peer review will be archived. Chrisnait (talk) 01:01, 25 January 2020 (UTC)