Wikipedia:Peer review/This Side of the Moon/archive1

This Side of the Moon


I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to take it to FAC. I would also like to get further feedback on how to improve the article in general even if I ultimately do not go down the FAC route. Any comment regarding prose and sourcing issues would be very much appreciated. Thank you, Aoba47 (talk) 05:52, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I will actually close this as the more I think about it, the more I realize that I am not particularly interested in working on this article any further. I'd rather put my energy into something else. Apologies to everyone for closing this so quickly. Aoba47 (talk) 23:27, 11 March 2021 (UTC)