Wikipedia:Peer review/Thomas Bailey Marquis/archive2

Thomas Bailey Marquis
I am looking for a detailed review from an experienced editor that will allow this article to go on to be a Featured Article. I recently requested a peer review (Peer review/Thomas Bailey Marquis/archive1) but I feel that although the reviewer answered the direct question that I raised in the request, the review was not as detailed and searching as I would expect for an FA review and the reviewer was too new and inexperienced.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, SpinningSpark 22:16, 26 January 2016 (UTC)