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Timeline of the 1992 Atlantic hurricane season

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 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for January 2009.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I want to receive a broad outlook on how to improve the article to featured list standard, I'm not much of a hurricane fan, but began work on this article. So fire away! Thanks. Sunderland06 (talk) 21:45, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Comments from RockManQ:
 * The 1992 Atlantic hurricane season was a below-average Atlantic hurricane season that produced six named tropical cyclones.
 * Redundancy; you use Atlantic hurricane season twice. Also, what defines a average season. Having read that, I have no idea. Done - Removed redundancy, and defined 10 storms as average.
 * The season officially started on June 1, 2007, and finished on November 30, although Subtropical Storm One formed outside the official timescale, on April 21.
 * It's kind of choppy; I suggest you break it up or find a better way to transition from one part to the next. Done - Removed a few commas, and added a semi colon, helps break it up a bit better.
 * Subtropical Storm One was the first recorded subtropical cyclone to form in April since tracking began in 1968.
 * I don't like the word tracking here, it doesn't really give us any understanding. Basically, since who began tracking what? Done - Changed.
 * Of the four hurricanes, Hurricane Andrew was the most intense, reaching Category 5 status.
 * Link Category 5 to the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane scale Done - Linked.
 * Overall, it's very short. The lead should be at least 3 paragraphs if possible. Did anymore storms make landfall during the 1992 season? If so it would be a good idea to mention them.

This was all I found with it. You have a good start, it just needs to be expanded some more. VX! 21:59, 6 January 2009 (UTC)