Wikipedia:Peer review/Tonsillolith/archive1

Tonsillolith
I'd just like to get a feel for the content and prose here, and, more specifically, suggestions on how to expand upon the


 * Treatment & Prevention section.

Thanks, I'm sorta new here, so be gentle, but firm... or something! Drockstar 09:21, 18 June 2006 (UTC)


 * The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and may or may not be accurate for the article in question (due to possible javascript errors/uniqueness of articles).


 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.


 * See if possible if there is a free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.


 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading  ==Magellan's journey== , use  ==Journey== .


 * Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.


 * There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged.


 * The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.


 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that the it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 2a.
 * You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions (and the javascript checklist; see the last paragraph in the lead) for further ideas.
 * Thanks, Andy t 13:44, 18 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Fixed some minor faults. Maybe you should finish treatments section-stub first. And some of the internal links point to an external site. So I think it's better like that: for example tumours of the tonsils point to an external link, but it should lead to Oropharyngeal cancer, and have a reference for the external link. I hope it is clear. :) NCursework 07:58, 26 June 2006 (UTC)