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Touch Me I'm Sick
This peer review discussion has been closed. This is a short and (hopefully) sweet article about the first ever grunge song. I'll be nominating this at FAC in a couple of days so I'd like as many issues ironed out before then. Not too many other editors have edited this article so I need to know if the prose, flow, MoS etc are fine. Thanks in advance.

Thanks, indopug (talk) 19:48, 28 April 2008 (UTC)

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 * Are there informations out there why the toilet bowl used as the cover of the song?
 * No clue; but it kinda fits with the them of the song actually...


 * I think you need to remove the qoutation marks in the qoutation you set off the text. I mean, that blue one. --Efe (talk) 00:49, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
 * The quotation marks are part of the cquote default format. indopug (talk) 06:20, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Really? I think its incorrect. --Efe (talk) 06:23, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Besides, its necessary, because the speaker is also written within the box, and the quotes help differentiate between the what she said and the name of the speaker/ explanation etc. indopug (talk) 07:09, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Maybe that rule is obsolete but it says that quotations set off the text must not bear quotation marks. Maybe we can ask MoS with these. BTW, "Baby Boy" failed to become an FA because I re-wrote the first section and so much errors were spotted. =) --Efe (talk) 07:12, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
 * :( indopug (talk) 07:14, 29 April 2008 (UTC)