Wikipedia:Peer review/Toyota Tercel/archive1

Toyota Tercel
I am aiming to make this into a featured article, so advice is appreciated. I've started trying to rewrite it, but there are some problems. Any help is appreciated. --TheM62Manchester 11:13, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
 * The copyrighted images require a fair use rational - there's at least two such images. WilyD 18:30, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
 * I think the first thing we should do is get rid of the fair use images, and then I think we should get rid of the timeline, as it's not that informative and takes up space. --ApolloBoy 19:05, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Timeline? The timeline is already it's own article - it can't get any smaller. WilyD 19:11, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
 * I know that, but I think we should delete it as it's practically redundant. Awards can be mentioned in the main article (i.e. "The Tercel won Award A from 1988-1993). --ApolloBoy 22:55, 11 August 2006 (UTC)


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