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Transcortical sensory aphasia
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I have been working with a group to better this article, transcortical sensory aphasia, as part of a project for our neuroscience class. We would greatly appreciate any and all feedback on how to achieve "Good Article" status.

Thanks, --Quallsk (talk) 04:14, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 12:46, 16 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Comments - no expert in the area but can provide a technical review.
 * I don't think a link to "speech" is needed, that's a fairly basic word given the complex nature of this article.
 * " and naming" what do you mean by this?
 * "exhibit paraphasia. [2]" remove space before ref.
 * "However, transcortical sensory aphasia..." you've already abbreviated it, so use TSA here. Apply hereinafter.
 * "repetition of words. [3]" remove space before ref. Check others.
 * "beginning speech therapy. Speech therapy methods" try to avoid the quick repetition of phrases like "speech therapy".
 * Brain caption needs a period (it's a complete sentence).
 * " heard.[1] [5]" avoid spaces between refs.
 * " e.g. when " just me, but I'd prefer "for instance" over "e.g."
 * Last sentence of Verbal comprehension section is unreferenced.
 * "or uses words in " - "or use words in"
 * Last three sentences of Imaging are unreferenced.
 * "does not appear overnight" - takes a significant period of time, or something, this "overnight" speak is a wee bit colloquial.
 * Wernicke's caption could be expanded a little to make it interesting and useful.
 * You don't need to relink aphasia again, and I'm sure you don't need to link brain by this point.
 * motor centers.[18] [19] - avoid spaces between refs
 * Don't need See also for articles that you've already linked in this article (e.g. Aphasia etc).
 * Ref 3 and ref 19 need an en-dash in the page range (per WP:DASH)
 * Don't mix date format in the refs, DMY or MD,Y but be consistent.
 * Refs 8, 9, 11 and 12 appear to have bare URLs, that will need to be addressed.