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Transformers (film)
I've listed this article for peer review because I want to make this a Featured article. It is currently a Good Article. I want to make this an FA because it is very comprehensive. Any comments or advice on how to improve this article to FA status should be very much appreciated.

Thanks,

Greg Jones II 02:12, 27 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 16:20, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Response
Hello, I've also wanted to list this article for featured article, because I think all the imformation are useful to nearly all readers. Please improve this article as much you can.

Thanks,

Ghazy Padmakoesoema —Preceding unregister user comment added by 76.247.63.137 (talk) 15:47, 28 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 16:24, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Names are linked too much. Michael Bay is linked in every section (11 in total), as is everyone else. You should refer to Steven Spielberg as just Spielberg after his first mention, as with other names. You don't need their full names every mention. Bay is also excessively linked in references. References like "STEVE JABLONSKY MORPHS HIS MUSIC TO SCORE TRANSFORMERS" should be lowercase. M3tal H3ad 07:39, 5 November 2007 (UTC)