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Tropical Storm Bilis (2006)
This article recently passed GAC, and is now a GA. Aside from expanding the storm history section, I'd like to know if there's anything else I can do to improve this article, in case I decide to take it on a FAC run later. --Core des at talk! 17:28, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
 * "a very damaging tropical storm that caused significant damage". Ouch. I'll have a proper look later. Yomangani talk 17:36, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
 * I don't see much wrong with it. There is a phrase "increased in organization" in the Storm History section, which is either a technical term that needs explaining or linking, or poor phrasing. I added the initialisations of the weather centers after their first mentions in the body, but you may want to move them up to the lead. I'm not sure you need to give the wind speed in m/s and km/h. Apart from that the only advantages I see that the featured Tropical Storm Allison has over this, are a bit more detail and some pictures of the damage and clean up. Yomangani talk 22:40, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the comments. The problem I've had with finding impact photos is that they're not free, and I'm not sure if fair use applies to photos taken by Xinhua (the PRC's national press agency - I know their images are not PD), plus all the pictures are labeled with fairly large watermarks. --Core des at talk! 23:03, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Just use some from Tropical Storm Allison - a wrecked house is a wreaked house. (just kidding) Yomangani talk 00:03, 14 September 2006 (UTC)