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Turkey
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because of a possible FA nomination.

Thanks, elmasmelih  20:55, 16 August 2014 (UTC)


 * Here are my suggestions. Hope it isn't too late as you opened this a few weeks ago.


 * First, check for broken links in the references section using http://dispenser.homenet.org/~dispenser/cgi-bin/webchecklinks.py?page=Turkey . There were a couple dozen broken links that I saw, some of which point to Turkish-language sites.


 * 2.1 Prehistory of Anatolia and Eastern Thrace
 * Third paragraph: "eighteenth through the 13th century BC”: be consistent in naming conventions (18th through the 13th)


 * 5.1 Biodiversity
 * Third paragraph: "Polonezköy Nature Park”: add a period at the end of the last sentence


 * 6 Economy
 * Second paragraph: take comma out after Customs Union, add space after comma following “tariff rates”


 * 7.1 Religion
 * Second paragraph: “some sources” sentence can be reworded to use one of the percentages or as a range (96.4-99.8%)
 * Semicolon instead of comma after Diyanet İşleri Başkanlığı)
 * 15 to 20 million. and according… replace period with comma


 * 7.3 Healthcare
 * Could add a little bit more here, but take out the top 3 diseases at the end


 * 8.1 Arts
 * First paragraph: “thirty, forty years” could be something like “thirty to forty years”


 * 8.2 Architecture
 * First paragraph: "Turkic architectue" to "Turkish architecture" (First word with different suffix, second with corrected spelling)


 * I think you should have a good shot at FA once you fix the broken reference links and make the above changes. Good luck! Let me know if you have further questions.


 * Also, I have a peer review request for Liberty in North Korea where I would appreciate any feedback. Tonystewart14 (talk) 14:55, 4 September 2014 (UTC)